remembrance

remembrance

i, remember, too, the times i remembered you. 
as i put water into the kettle or
picked up the little broken spoon from within
the sugar pot
both acts, i agree, too mundane to mention,
alas, these too, i’m left, alone, to do.
i remember; i’ve remembered you.

-rizwana

4 Comments

  • Alphawings

    February 18, 2017 at 11:35 pm Reply

    Beautifully written.

  • accidentallyinked

    February 19, 2017 at 3:15 pm Reply

    Lovely.

  • InnosinnedAes-Teh-tics

    March 19, 2017 at 9:35 pm Reply

    Yes obviously I read this too while on the study break and had promised myself to actually comment and appreciate once done with the test. I literally have the email starred as important in my inbox which notified me of this post of yours but I just can’t understand how I really forgot to do that. I usually do not forget this kinda stuff:/. This poem was A-MAZING! I Seriously lovedd the enjambent and occasional caesurae, they just make the simple lines soo impactful. Totally loved the last line!

    • tinkererofwords

      March 28, 2017 at 11:39 pm Reply

      AHHHHHHH GURL. GAWD. you’re so sweet ima get diabeteeez. :))
      no but seriously :$ thank youuuuu! I’m beyond happy you enjoyed it (spoiler: I’ve never heard of ‘enjambent’ or ‘caesurae’ before :3 ) :’) shukriyaaaa, utterly!

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